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AT: Leaf by Kash-Phia AT: Leaf by Kash-Phia
Art trade with :icondiyane: :la:
First time attempting a serious detailed bg :D I kinda like how the colors came out but i think it could use a little detailing =w=

btw this is Leaf from the pokemon games FRLG NOT Blue from pokespe =w= they are different
I hope you like it ;w;
that one tree in the bg: :iconforeveraloneplz:
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Leaf (c) pokemon FRLG
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:iconsamooraii:
Here we go! I promised I would critique you so!
(Sorry if I'm too harsh!)

Good stuff:
The eyes are really done well and look great! The hair looks lovely and I love the sense of direction in it. The Clothing is good, and its shading is nice too. The hills in the background are gorgeous and I love your color sense.

Stuff you need to work on:
Try to determine the light source more as that will help you with shading. Her fingers look a bit stiff on her right hand so try and space them out a little. The clouds should be a little more detailed and the tree looks really out of place. The stream looks a bit bright in some places so still, try to determine the light source.

I hope this helps! ^^
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:icontorchickn:
torchickn Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Love the coloring!! 
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:iconbaddramaturge:
BadDramaturge Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
Very beautiful!
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:iconincompetentrainy:
IncompetentRainy Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This has officially convinced me to cosplay as her.
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:iconmaiichu:
Maiichu Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
kyah Leaaaaafffff :la: my favorite poke girl :meow: you did a great job! i love the eyes and the hair looks super flowy!
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:iconnavusumo:
navusumo Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
beautiful shading :)
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:iconcyndaquilgirl:
cyndaquilgirl Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icondiskfire:
diskfire Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
Nice! :D
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:iconcorafeltmarker:
CoraFeltMarker Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love her! The only thing I'd say could be critquable is the right hand. The fingers sort of drop off.

Sorry if I haven't been much help, infact I think I'm even worse at hands. However I hope I was helpful and I think she looks really pretty overall.
:iconcutiesmileplz: I love how you color
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:iconriz--chan:
Riz--cHaN Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
EACH AND EVERY WORK YOU UPLOAD IT BECOMES BEAUTIFUL TO LOOK AT EVERY TIME>.<
Ah~ u hav improved soo much DOST :iconchuuplz:
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:iconbyakurin:
Byakurin Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahem.

Why do you draw so fast? I feel ashamed now ;A; Thank you so much Kash I love it so much! NEW IPHONE WALLPAPER <33

I'm gonna work on your part until Im sure it will make you cry ;n;

GAH THANK YOU BBY :iconluvluvplz:
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:iconkash-phia:
Kash-Phia Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Mood swings=Sudden rush of motivation= BOOOM XD
uguu I'm so glad you liked it bby :heart: lol wallpaper what XD
I'm sure your part will be even more gorgeous <3
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:iconbyakurin:
Byakurin Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL xD Yes I can be very bipolar when I see beautiful stuffs like this <3

Uguu I love it ;A; Lol yes, I showed it around in school today, aha! c:
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:iconpurpleofdoom:
PurpleOfDoom Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I critiqued your work last time, (on my old account) but this time I can't say there are any glaring errors at all. The lineart is much cleaner and the blending has improved a lot! Just keep fine tuning. :D

*A*m Her hair is so shiny!
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:iconkash-phia:
Kash-Phia Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks so much XD
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:iconmiyamiyah:
miyamiyah Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You make me miss FRLG game ><
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:iconkash-phia:
Kash-Phia Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
omg yes XD It was the longest game i ever played lol XD I played it for 100 hours+
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:iconevilgirl1:
Evilgirl1 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
AHHHH <33 MY MOST FAVOURITE POKE-GIRL <333 She's so cute in your style! ^w^ I like the colors and this a nice BG ~ !

U-um I know it have nothing to do with anything but... Who do you ship with Leaf? >u<
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:iconkash-phia:
Kash-Phia Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :D
I ship her with green game wise :D
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:iconevilgirl1:
Evilgirl1 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
Green? You mean Blue no? =u= Green is in the manga and Blue is nothing like him, he's a huge jerk in the game :XD: Thanks for replying~
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:iconkash-phia:
Kash-Phia Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
errr well the rival is called "green" in both games and manga, but only in the japanese versions, and so i call him that too OwO
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:iconevilgirl1:
Evilgirl1 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
Well I go by the english names but understood ~

Umm May I know why you ship them OwO ?
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:iconkash-phia:
Kash-Phia Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
rival relationship XD
It can be developed quite a bit :3
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:iconamuri-dandelion:
Amuri-Dandelion Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like Leafs Design, she looks so pretty ;w;
And you draw her so well /)//x//(\ <33
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:iconkash-phia:
Kash-Phia Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
aaah thank you <3
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tachii Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student General Artist
I really like the colors! they're bright yet soft, the coloring on the hair is so nice *_* i feel it's a little loose/unpolished, maybe clean up and tighten up in some areas? (like there's a stray line from her neck in the chin, and the coloring bleeds out around the tips) the background, I really like it!! the water is my favorite. the tree seems kinda random, although it does help to balance out the pic (maybe add in a few more?) the grassy field is nice, but could benefit from some more shades, the values are all too light! but yeah like you mentioned in your desc, more detail! Also leaf is SUPER CUTE no issues there hehe :heart: But overall i really like this, it feels like it's on the right track to an even nicer piece ;w; sorry this is long lol it says critique requested but i dont wanna publish them like in dA's form XD;; I hope this helps
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:iconkash-phia:
Kash-Phia Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot!! Ok I'll try my best ;u;
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:iconsakuelle:
Sakuelle Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL ARTWORK ;W;
The coloring is awesome and everythinggg <33

btw Kash... for our AT.. I'm very busy.. I'm sorry!! QAQ I'm working on it now.. I'm lining it already D': I'm sorry!
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:iconkash-phia:
Kash-Phia Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank youuuu <3 ;w;
oh lol its ok XD i don't mind~
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:iconsakuelle:
Sakuelle Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome! ;u;
Yay! Thank you very much~ ^^
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llarawrr Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
d'aaaw this is so pretty! :D
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